Showing posts with label In the Memory House. Show all posts
Showing posts with label In the Memory House. Show all posts

Saturday, December 3, 2011

We have a Winner! (and More Elective Surgery)

Fred, the envelope please...

Mary Rajotte is the winner of my 50/50 split of In the Memory House profits for November, thus continuing a fine tradition of Canadians winning my contests. Congrats, Mary. I'll be in touch to share the bounty.

Which might (or might not, who knows?) have been a bigger bounty had I started with this:


Instead of In the Memory House. Sometimes I need a little more market research. I tend to be too much of a gut guy. You see, In the Memory House is also the title of Howard Mansfield's book of essays about New England culture and history.

Yeah. Not my book at all. Mine features a living house which tries to make friends by killing people. Think of it as a house with Asperger's on steroids.

So maybe Echoes of the Dead has a little more zip. The word "Dead" lands hard, at least. It does deliver the message directly, and I've found that is a key piece of marketing any book. And yes, the paperback is still coming.

And then I've nixed Smoke and replaced it with Vengeful Spirits. Again, I think the new title lands harder and sends a little more of a direct message about the book's content.  I've also tweaked the cover with new font and image:



This poor puppy has been through a number of changes, originally starting as Borrowed Saints. Like I said, I'm a gut guy. My heart and mind need to arm wrestle before the next book skitters into the wild.

Congrats again, Mary.  And good luck, my dear books.  I will try to do you better in the future.

Monday, November 28, 2011

Clearing Clutter


I've nuked a good portion of my blog today, including all of the pretty little pictures of my books on the sidebar.

Don't worry, they're still here, just not plastered to my virtual front door. (Not that you were worried, anyway.)  I'm feeling somewhat scattered. Maybe it's my new fake name. (Heh.)

Maybe it's because I woke at 2:30 AM last night, evidently in training for the pending addition to the family.

Don't forget the free story offer if you grab a copy of In the Memory House by Wednesday. I'm also splitting Memory House profits with one lucky soul. Let's get reading.

Sunday, November 20, 2011

In the Memory House, Chapter 1 (and a free story)

If you've bought an e-copy of In the Memory House (or plan to do so before the end of the month), email me at aaron.polson(at)gmail.com for a free bonus story. 

In the Memory House is currently available at Amazon.com and Smashwords.

Chapter 1 - In the Memory House


Kelsey hated the club.
She hated the noise, the sweat-slicked men bumping and grabbing and oozing all over her. She hated the way the throbbing beat worked into her brain, and how she woke the morning after a dancing with the beat still pounding in her blood. She knew these were things a fit, attractive, twenty-seven-year-old woman was supposed to like.
But she didn’t.
She went to Tremors with Brit and Caitlin because she didn’t want to be alone, not after the dreams came back. Jared had haunted her dreams for the past week, Jared and the dead man with no blood. Even during waking hours, if Kelsey closed her eyes, the puckered-white flesh of the dead man’s gashes blinked in her memory. It haunted her more than the wreck, but Jared’s disappearance and the dull ached it caused weighed more than the dead man.
Nearly five years later, and the dreams were as bad as they’d ever been.
Even though she hated it, the club banished demons better than graduate studies ever had—much better than Human Lifespan Development or Principles of Testing and Measurement. A PhD in psychology seemed rather meaningless after what happened in the house. The world felt rather purposeless after Jared vanished without a trace.
“Hey, Kels? Where are you?” Brit asked. She’d been Kelsey’s friend since high school and still wore her dark hair past shoulder length. Kelsey had always thought of Brit—short for Brittany—as pretty, but in a vaguely Eastern European and mysterious way.
“Sorry,” Kelsey said. “Sorry… Just thinking.”
Brit flashed her news-desk-perfect teeth. “You need more booze, girlie.” She pushed a plastic cup filled with bright green liquid across the table. “This isn’t the time for thinking. It’s the time for drinking and getting stupid.”
Kelsey looked at the cup. The drink, whatever it was, glowed like radioactive Kool-Aid in a bad science fiction movie. Her eyebrows rose.
“Chill out. It’s a Midori Sour. Tastes like a Jolly Rancher but numbs the worry center.” Brit’s forefinger tapped her temple. “You’ve got way too much on your brain, sweetie. I don’t know why you’d want to stuff your pretty little head with all that psychobabble anyway.” 
“It’s not that.”
Brit nodded. “Right.”
She shook her hair, and long black strands flopped over her shoulders. Her eyes—almost as dark as her hair—drilled through bone, mining Kelsey’s secret thoughts. At least Kelsey felt she was. They’d been friends for a long time, true, but Brit hadn’t gone on the ski trip. Brit hadn’t clutched the door handle in Johnny’s SUV while the vehicle spun out of control and landed in a ditch. She hadn’t felt the brutal, numbing cold from the snow, the endless white blanket which plagued them to the porch, which forced them inside. She wasn’t the one to find the dead man, wrists splayed open in his bathtub. She didn’t lose Jared.
“Earth to Kelsey. I’ve lost you again. Go on and take a drink.”
Kelsey touched the cold plastic cup.  She brought it to her lips and took a drink. The alcohol was cool and sweet and sour as it washed over her tongue.  It warmed her chest as it slid down her throat. Maybe she did need to loosen up and get, as Brit so eloquently said, stupid. Maybe she needed to bury the past and try and forget Jared, forget the house, and forget the dead man. Just dreams… Dreams and bad memories. She closed her eyes and took another sip. It did taste a bit like a Jolly Rancher.
“Watermelon,” Kelsey said.
“You like?”
Kelsey smiled. “I like.  Let’s dance.”
Bodies shook and cavorted on the dance floor, all awash with flashing lights.  Throbbing music—a pop tune with relentless, pounding beat—swayed arms and legs in unison. Kelsey followed Brit to an empty corner, and both joined the frenzy. Kelsey’s eyes roved the crowd. Even at twenty-seven, she was toward the upper age limit at Tremors. Some faces looked like children—a few might have been students from the abnormal psychology lecture for which she was the teaching assistant. 
Three men—boys, Kelsey thought—in matching silver silk shirts made their way through the crowded dance floor. Each carried a plastic cup and faux-danced so as not to spill. Sweat slicked their faces so each sparkled under the bright, flickering lights. Kelsey watched them as she shuffled her feet. Some malaise and inhibition sloughed from her skin as she let the beat take her body. She hated the club, but Brit was right about one thing. She needed to let loose, get stupid. She hated the club, but dancing felt good.
She leaned close to Brit. “Those three are on the move.  I think they’re looking for wounded members of the herd.”
Brit laughed. “The lead is cute. Kind of. But his nose.” She scowled and shook her head so her hair spun from side to side.
“It’s huge,” Kelsey said.
“You know what they say about boys with big noses.” Brit ran her hands down her body, rolling her eyes in mock ecstasy.
As they both laughed, Caitlin, the shortest of the three, joined them. Kelsey felt Caitlin had the best body, busty but lithe with just enough ass to shake.  Her blue eyes were monstrous, near Anime size, and hair in dirty blonde ropes offered a sweet, innocent disguise. Caitlin was always happy and Kelsey a little jealous.
“I thought I’d lost you two.”
The music shifted. The three silver-shirted boys danced toward them.
“I’m taking a break,” Kelsey said.
“Me too. I need another drink.” Brit grabbed Caitlin by the wrist.
“What?” Caitlin’s alcohol-slick eyes were on the boys in silver.
“We don’t want to lose you to the wolf pack.”
The three friends skirted to the crowded dance floor’s edge. Caitlin craned her neck to watch the boys in silver. Kelsey fell into her chair, suddenly feeling very tired.
“You two want anything? Another Midori Sour?”
Kelsey shook her head. “I’m good, thanks.”
“I could use another screwdriver.” Caitlin held out her half-empty glass. “Pretty please.”
Brit rolled her eyes and headed for the bar.
Caitlin pulled her glass to her lips. Kelsey grabbed her forearm before she took a drink.
“You don’t want to do that.”
“I don’t?” Caitlin pouted. “Why not?”
“You left it at the table. Anybody could have slipped something in there.”
“Oh my God.” Caitlin snorted. “You are such a mother, Kels.  Lighten up.” Caitlin pulled her arm away, and a little liquid sloshed from the glass as the lights went out over the table.
“We hoped you ladies would have stayed on the dance floor.”
It was the nose, the leader of the silver-shirted wolf pack. His buddies grinned at either shoulder. Up close, his nose was big, ridiculously big, and Kelsey couldn’t stifle a giggle when she remembered what Brit suggested about boys with big noses. Big noses mean big…
“Some of us would have,” Caitlin said. She wrapped her tongue around the tiny black straw in her glass.
Kelsey rolled her eyes.  She let her gaze stray across the room and fall on a tall man near the entrance. A flare burst in her memory. Johnny.  She hadn’t seen him in almost five years, not since graduation, but it was him. His tall, cut features gave him away. Several years hadn’t changed anything about his face, his sleek, angular cheekbones and firm chin. Kelsey could almost feel his blue eyes, even across a dim club filled with people. He wasn’t dancing, just standing near the wall, almost like he was waiting for someone. Maybe looking for someone. Kelsey’s stomach knotted.
“…and our unit ships out at month’s end.”
Kelsey snapped back to her immediate vicinity. “What? Are you trying that old line?  C’mon, boys. Really?”
Big nose blinked hard at the word boys.
Caitlin kicked Kelsey’s leg under the table.
“Whatever.” Big Nose frowned. “I can see you’re not interested.  We were talking to your friend.”
Brit returned balancing three drinks in her hands. She read the look on Kelsey’s face. “Looks like I’m missing the party.”
Kelsey glanced at Johnny again. The dance floor lights flashed red and blue and white. “I was just leaving.” She climbed from her chair. Big Nose looked her up and down as she stood, and the two baboons at his shoulders did the same. She hated feeling dirty when a greasy boy eyed her like a cut of meat. She wanted a shower, to clean off the slime he’d heaped on her.
“Not bad,” he said.
Kelsey’s fingers curled into a fist at her side. “Fuck off.” She started to walk away.
He grabbed her wrist. “You wish, honey.”
Kelsey yanked her arm from his grasp. The flight across the club blurred in her head along with the music’s pound and her feet against the floor. She heard Brit’s voice bark her name twice, “Kels—Kels.” Shapes shifted and contorted, silhouettes of people, cardboard cutouts.  Her head spun.  By the time she worked her way across the room, Johnny was gone.

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

A Shocking Contest

Ken Wood, editor (and writer) extraordinaire, notified me "Wanting It" from Shock Totem #3 has been recommended for a Stoker. This doesn't mean I'll be adding "Stoker Recommended Author" on any book covers or anything because that would be silly. But it's nice to know somebody likes your work. If you haven't read "Wanting It" or anything from Shock Totem, leave this blog immediately and grab a copy.
I promised a contest, and a contest you shall have. This one relates to my recent release of In the Memory House.

An author can always use a bit of help spreading the word about his/her work, so that's what I'm asking of you, dear readers.

Mention the book in a blog, tweet about it, tuck it into a newsletter, Facebook it (is that a verb now?)... whatever. Just help spread the word.

If you tweet, mention my handle (@aaronpolson). I'll probably stumble across other references on the web, but you can either email me (aaron.polson(at)gmail.com) or drop a line in the comments to make sure I have your entries. And you can enter multiple times.

The contest runs through the end of the month.

What do you win? Half of my proceeds from In the Memory House through November 30th. Incentive? Yes.

The links:

In the Memory House at Amazon.com

In the Memory House at Amazon.co.uk

In the Memory House at Smashwords

Thank you, and happy hunting.

Monday, November 14, 2011

In the Memory House Now Available

In the Memory House is now available at Amazon.com, Amazon UK, and Smashwords with other formats (including print) to follow...

Of course you can sample the goods at yesterday's post

Anyway (and of more importance), Owen's soccer team won their tournament this weekend. The final standings came down to goal differential, which they edged the second place team by one. Yikes. He played his eight-year-old heart out, and I couldn't be more proud.

Better than a book release any day.

But book releases are great, too--really.  ;)

And "contests" are even better. I have one to announce tomorrow.

Stay tuned.

Sunday, November 13, 2011

Sample Sunday: In the Memory House



In the Memory House, a new supernatural thriller, is now available at Amazon.com, Amazon UK, and Smashwords with other formats (including print) to follow...

From In the Memory House:
They never planned to enter the house. 
They never knew the house existed.  If not for the snowstorm, they would have never found the house—or, more accurately, the house would have never found them.  As it was, five friends stood on the concrete slab porch while wind whipped snow in small eddies around them Johnny, tall and angular in a light jacket, rapped his knuckles on the door.  The two girls—Kelsey with her dark, ropey curls tucked under an ivory stocking cap and Sarah, blonde and pale and pretty and wearing pink—huddled together against the siding.  Ben, soft and thick with a lingering layer of childhood fat, leaned against the railing, staring across the white field. 
“Nobody’s home,” Jared said.  He wasn’t wearing a proper coat.  As they scrambled from the ditch, Kelsey had looked at his grey sweatshirt and jeans and had said he would freeze.  Jared, his brown eyes dark enough to challenge a moonless night, had smiled and said, “I’ll be fine.”  On the porch, he didn’t even shiver. “Doesn’t look like we’re getting in. We should head down the road, see if we can find someplace, any place to ride out the storm.  Nobody has any cell service, so we can’t call snow-plows-r-us.”
Ben rolled his eyes.  “We’d be fine if dipshit hadn’t landed us in the ditch.”
Johnny wheeled from the door. His blue eyes sparked. His fists clenched and unclenched. “Dipshit?  I didn’t see you volunteer to drive.  Damn SUV needs new tires. They’re as bald as Sarah’s dad.”
“Hey,” Sarah said.
Kelsey squeezed her arm. “He’s right.  Your dad is pretty shiny upstairs.  But I’m freezing. Right. Now. Can we just break in or something?  I’m sure Farmer Bob or whoever owns this place would rather have a broken window than five humansicles in his field.”
“Farmer Bob?” Jared poked his head out from under the porch roof. “Damn place is brick. Three stories. How do you figure a farmer lives here?”
Kelsey shrugged and went back to shivering. “Out in the middle of nowhere, that’s how.”
“It’s an old lock.  We can pick it rather than break a window.” Johnny knelt in front of the door and squinted through the key hole.  “Does anybody have a hair pin? Sarah? Kels?”
“Hairpin?” Sarah screwed up her face. “Are you nuts?”
“I dunno.  Seems like it should work.  They do it in all those old crusty movies J-rod watches.”
“Those are classics,” Jared said. “God… No taste. Have you even tried the door?”
“What do you think he’s been doing?” Ben boxed Jared on the shoulder.  “Knock-knock, who’s there?”
Johnny stretched to his full six foot, two inch height, placed one hand on the doorknob, but yanked it away.
“What’s wrong?” Kelsey asked.
“I dunno. It’s cold.”
“Of course it’s cold, numb-nuts.  It’s freezing. Have you seen the snow?” Ben waved across the field. “Your hand’s turning blue, too.”
Johnny rubbed his fingers. “No.  It was a different kind of cold.”
“Here,” Jared said, stepping forward. He wrapped his fingers around the knob and twisted. The door held for a moment, but then gave with a pop and creak. “I see what you mean cold. But here we are, folks.  No broken windows, no picked locks, no frozen twenty-two-year-olds on the porch.  It wasn’t locked. Looks like the innkeeper doesn’t mind trusting his neighbors. Our sanctuary.” He stepped aside so the others could enter.
Warmer air greeted them—not exactly warm air, but not as biting as the frigid exterior. A smell hung in the air, too, just like every house has its own odor. This smell was different, cold and sterile and clean, without the expected hint of dust and mold which an older house should have.
“Hello?” Jared called into the house. No answer came.
“It’s dark,” Kelsey said. “And it smells funny, too.”
Ben sniffed. “Smells fine to me. Smells pretty clean.”
“Yes… That’s what I mean,” Sarah said. “I mean it smells funny because it’s clean. I expected old person smell.  Or dirt. Something musty and earthy. Farmer smell.”
“Maybe Farmer Bob likes to take care of his stuff.” Ben strode through the foyer, past the dark wooden staircase and matching banister, and turned right into what appeared to be a living room.  A couch and two matched chairs were arranged on an ornate rug, the couch in the middle with the chairs facing each other on either side. Each was lined with deep red upholstery. The rug and furniture shared a subtle paisley pattern, and in the dim light appeared to be an even darker red design on the burgundy fabric. A subtle, tan wallpaper covered the open stretches of wall. Deep hardwood molding surrounded everything.
“Find a light switch,” Johnny said.
“Here.” Jared punched a black button. “Old school switch.” A simple brass chandelier flickered above their heads.  Weak, yellow light washed over the room. “At least we have power.”
“Not much of an improvement, if you ask me.” Ben walked around the couch and plopped in a seat.  He crossed his boots on one armrest. “Farm Bob has some wickedly Victorian taste in furniture.”
“Ben—get your wet feet off the…” Kelsey’s mouth hung open as she scanned the floor. “It’s dry.  Your feet are dry.”
“See.  No problem.”  Ben grinned. “I must have knocked all the snow off before coming in.”
Kelsey backed toward the door. “I don’t like it in here. I don’t like this house.”
“Shhhhh.” Ben pressed a finger against his lips. “It might here you.” He wagged his eyebrows.
“God, Ben. You and Kels sound like a B horror flick. First hairpins, now the house is alive.” Sarah rolled her eyes. “Shouldn’t we call somebody?”
Johnny nodded. “I’ll see if there’s a phone around here.  Maybe in the kitchen or hallway.  In this black hole, Farmer Bob must have a line to the outside world.”
Sarah grabbed Johnny’s arm. “I’ll go with you.”
Kelsey’s eyes moved from Ben’s boots, to the floor and back to the boots. “I think I’ll go with you guys.  Ben? Jared?”
Ben closed his eyes. Jared shook his head. “I’m going to chill right here. No pun intended, of course.”
Johnny, Sarah, and Kelsey circled through the living room, past an opening for a hallway, and into the dining room.  Their footsteps on the hardwood floor were tiny things, whispers in a monstrous cave’s mouth.  When they walked on the rug in the living room, they didn’t make a sound. A large wooden block table with a set of four chairs sat in the middle of the dining room.  The table top, a dark, polished walnut finish, was clean. A point of light from the window reflected in the middle. Kelsey walked to the table and rubbed a fingertip across the surface. Her skin squeaked against the wood.
Johnny joined her at the side of the table. “Farmer Bob sure keeps this place clean, doesn’t he?  Kind of a funny house—not as big on the inside as I expected. I guess it does have the third floor windows.  Maybe somebody bound and gagged—”
“Stop it, Johnny.  You’re starting to sound a little like Ben,” Sarah said. “Creepy-deepy Ben.”
“You invited him on this trip.” Johnny leaned over one of the chairs. “I didn’t.”
Sarah shot Kelsey a glare. “Kels opened her big mouth and Ben asked if he could go.  What was I going to say?”
“No.”  Johnny smiled. “Fifth wheel and all.”
“He paid for a fifth of the cabin and bought us a lot of booze.” Sarah twirled a finger through a strand of hair. “That part wasn’t so bad.”
Kelsey’s chest tightened.  For a moment, she couldn’t catch her breath.  She fell back against the table and touched her neck with one hand.
“What’s wrong?” Johnny asked.
Kelsey shook her head. “Nothing. Nothing’s wrong.  I just felt sort of, weird. Like asthma when I was a little girl.  It’s nothing really. Just a little adrenaline from the wreck.  I’m just feeling a little shaken.” She didn’t want to mention the cave, how she’d gotten lost on a tour as a girl and left in pure darkness. She didn’t want to mention how she’d just felt a twinge of the same, all-encompassing fear.
Sarah rolled her eyes and mouthed the word “drama” toward Kelsey. 
“Let’s get out, then.  All of us.” Johnny strode across the room and through a small archway. “Bingo.”
Kelsey closed her eyes against the harsh daggers in Sarah’s icy blue stare. It was Johnny. Kelsey knew it as sure as she knew her name. Jared was a great guy, a solid friend, but they both wanted Johnny and Sarah sharpened her knives. Kelsey chewed her lip and shifted away.  
“Let’s see what he found,” Sarah said. She turned and ducked through the archway without another glance at Kelsey.
Johnny stood in the middle of a bright kitchen with an avocado green phone receiver in one hand. A looping phone cord, matching the phone’s green, dangled to the floor. Johnny’s face was turned down in a frown.
“What?” Sarah asked.
“Dead.”
Kelsey felt a shiver at the word as though Johnny’s voice had become an ice block and rubbed over her back.  “Dead?”
“Dead-dead. No signal. No buzz. No nothing.”  Johnny waved the receiver toward the windows, a solid bank of which filled the wall behind the kitchen sink and between the cabinets.  Yellow and white gingham curtains hung open revealing a blinding field of snow and small shed behind the house. The cabinets had been painted white with yellow highlights to match the curtains. “Must be the snow.”
“But the house has power,” Sarah said. “If the power—”
“It doesn’t work that way, Sarah.  Electricity and phone are on separate lines. I figured most phone lines were buried out here, though.”  Johnny dropped the receiver on its wall cradle.  Plastic clicked against plastic. “We better get back to the others and figure out what the hell we’re going to do.”
Kelsey started back through the archway, but paused. “Couldn’t we go the other way?”
“What do you mean?” Sarah asked.
“Well, we passed the stairwell when we came in, walked through the couch room—the parlor, past the one hallway, and through the dining room.  Another living room or parlor or whatever should be the other way.  Just on the other side of the wall.”
Johnny shrugged. “Makes sense.  But there’s only the one entrance to the kitchen. Not to mention the screwy décor for a house—or inn or whatever—of this age. Avocado green is so ‘70s.” He gestured to the phone.
“When I see him, I’ll tell Farmer Bob you don’t approve,” Sarah said.  “Let’s just go, okay?”
“I thought Farmer Bob was creepy-deepy Ben’s name for our dear host.”
Sarah scowled at Kelsey and walked through the arch.  The three returned they way they’d come, passing the massive table, the small hallway and into the room with a couch and two chairs, the parlor to the right of the big staircase. Ben was on the couch, feet still propped high. He’d folded his hands behind his head and appeared to be sleeping.
“Where’s Jared?” Johnny asked.
Ben’s eyes flickered open.  “Huh?”
Sarah sat on the edge of a chair with her back arched as though she wasn’t comfortable coming in contact with the house in any way. “Jared.  Where is he?  He was with you, in here, when we went on the phone hunt.”
The tightening came back to Kelsey, pressing against her lungs from all sides. She felt a tingling, hot braid of nerves climb her back and flush her face.  She looked from Ben to Sarah and Johnny. The chandelier flickered, darkening the room. But it hadn’t actually flickered, had it? Her eyes tricked her, of course...
“Dunno,” Ben said.  “I guess he just went exploring.”
“Exploring? Here?” Sarah scooted closer to the chair’s edge. “What the hell for?”
“Architecture.  Jared’s major, Sarah.  Maybe he’s been inspired by this place.  Weren’t you just saying something about the kitchen?”
Sarah glanced toward Kelsey. “That was Kels.”
Ben stood from the couch, stretching for the ceiling. “How big do you think this place is, anyway?  I mean, from the outside, it looked massive. Like an old castle even, all that limestone around the foundation.”
“It could have been an inn or hotel, I guess.” Johnny shook his head. “I don’t know. But we should find Jared.”  He walked to the stairs and cupped a hand against his face. “Jared?”
“What made you Captain Responsibility all of a sudden?  I’m sure Jared’s around here somewhere.”
Jared’s gone. The thought came to Kelsey as her breath came back to her lungs. She leaned against a wall, trying to steady her wobbly nerves. Jared’s gone, and he won’t be coming back. She shook her head, trying to dislodge the unwelcome thought, but its roots had grown deep quickly. 
“And we need to find him.”  Johnny pointed at Ben. “We can split up and stick together. I’ll take upstairs with—”
“Wait. Whoa.  Slow down there, Johnny.” Ben waved his hands. “Who appointed you Fred of this Scooby Doo crew?”
Johnny’s hand clamped on the stair railing. His knuckles began to whiten.  “Just bad vibes about this place.”  He peeled his hand away from the rail and looked at it. “Just bad vibes.”
Kelsey rubbed her shoulders. “I felt it when we came in.  I feel it now.  Maybe it’s just because of the wreck. I don’t know. But I don’t like it here. It’s too clean. It’s too—”
Wood groaned from the floor above them and caught Kelsey’s words in her mouth and sprinkled her with a wave of chills.
“That’s probably our intrepid architect now.” Ben smiled. “I’ll go and check.”
“We don’t go alone.” Johnny glanced at Kelsey and then his eyes rested on Sarah.
Sarah rolled her eyes. “Fine. I’ll go with you Benny-boy.” She glared at Kelsey as she crossed the room.
The two vanished up the stairs into the second floor’s darkness.  Johnny stood with his back turned to Sarah for a moment, a long moment in which the chill left her and she began thinking about Johnny—his broad shoulders and lean, stone-chiseled face.  Was it wrong to hope Johnny might come around, might choose her?  He’d broken up with Sarah two months ago, making the ski trip awkward—a reason, even a small one—to be thankful for Ben being the fifth wheel.  Still, she had hoped Jared and Sarah might hit it off, couple up, and leave Johnny for her.  She looked up, caught Johnny’s eyes, and felt a warm rush in her cheeks.
“Why didn’t you go with Ben?” she asked.
“Ben?  Sometimes I really hate that bastard. I didn’t want to punch him. I mean, how the hell can the guy fall asleep after hitting the ditch?”
“He was asleep before hitting the ditch,” Sarah said.
Johnny nodded. “True.  Besides, I didn’t want to leave any of the women alone.”
Kelsey crossed her arms. Now wasn’t the time to show her hand. “How chivalrous.”
“Don’t go all feminista on me.” Johnny shrugged. “We don’t even know who lives here—hell, Farmer Bob could be asleep upstairs.  Maybe he’s an ax murderer. This damn house must be at least four or five thousand square feet. Three stories and a basement by the looks of the foundation. Huge. Maybe he is asleep upstairs. Maybe he knows we’re here, and the old guy’s watching.”
Kelsey shivered. “Stop playing. You’re giving me the creepy-crawlies. Why do you call him an old guy, anyway?”
“Just a feeling.”
“Yeah. Me too.  The feeling.” Kelsey rubbed her arms. The air had dropped a few degrees, but there wasn’t a draft. If anything the room was dead. “Maybe it’s the jitters after the accident, but I don’t like this place.”
“Definitely has a vibe.” Johnny moved closer to Kelsey. His blue eyes locked onto hers. He held out a hand. “We won’t be here long.”
She hesitated, her breath catching in her throat, and then took his hand. The skin was cool and ruff, not warm like she’d expected. Maybe it was the room. Maybe the chill was in the house itself. “We should look, too.”
Johnny turned toward the hallway. “The basement, wherever it is?”
“I don’t want to, but—”
The scream stopped Kelsey’s words before they left her mouth. Sarah’s scream. Kelsey didn’t think again until she was, following Johnny, halfway up the stairs. They rounded the landing, hurtled the final flight, spilling into the darkened second story hallway.  Dim, yellowish light filtered from a window at one end. Down the other direction, a black figure waved.
“Down here!” Ben called.
Kelsey’s eyes adjusted to the darkened hallway, but she couldn’t see Sarah. Johnny trotted in front. He didn’t seem to be afraid—not like she was. Why was her heart rattling in her chest?  Why did she feel like she couldn’t breathe? Ben moved back, further into the hallway. Johnny stepped through the doorway to which Ben had been pointing.  He wheeled and tried to grab Kelsey, but too late.
She gasped. “Oh my God.”  Her hands covered her mouth, but she couldn’t shut her eyes.
A man lay in a half-filled bathtub. His near-white hair clung close to his pinkish scalp, but was not wet. Although his hair showed old age’s silver-grey, the lack of lines on his face told a much younger story. His dead eyes stared at them, almost as though he’d been watching the door when he died. Almost as though he’d been waiting for them. In his left hand, draped as it was over the tub’s edge, he held a knife, the folding type which held utility blades used in construction.  Thick gashes marred both wrists, a disordered criss-crossing of cuts. His right arm stretched along the far edge of the tub and wore a slash from the base of his hand to mid forearm. The cuts on the left were much smaller.
Sarah whimpered from the corner.  Johnny stepped inside and pulled her to him, pressing her face against his chest. “There’s no blood,” she muttered.
“Bullshit,” Ben said. He’d closed in behind Kelsey, blocking the door.
Sarah pushed away from Johnny’s chest and glared at Ben. Her voice became firm, almost angry. “No blood. There’s no God-damned blood.”
Kelsey’s body turned to ice as she hunted—but didn’t find—a single drop.  The few inches of bathwater in the tub were clear despite the old man being fully clothed.  The linoleum floor reflected a small, sunny patch from the window but was otherwise unmarred.
“No blood at all.”

Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Coming Soon...


Five years ago, one of them never left the house. Now they've returned, and Hollywood cameras will catch every moment...

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

WIP Wednesday: Winners, Start Your Imaginations

First things first, let's hear it for my October Contest winners:

Grand Prize: Gef Fox

1st Place: Anthony Rapino

2nd Place: K.C. Shaw

Fred, tell them what they've won...

"Grand Prize: You name and supply physical/psychological characteristics for a character in my next book. Here's the teaser: Four friends gather at their twenty year high school reunion to pay respects to a friend who died in high school... Within a week of their meeting, one of them is murdered. I'll leave it there, for now.

1st Place:
You supply me with two characters (general types, e.g., plumber--you can name them if you wish), a situation, and a setting, and I write a piece of flash fiction (of at least 500 words) to share with the world.You may even name the piece, if you wish.

2nd Place:
I will write a Friday Flash (of at least 100 words) with any title you supply."

As for the Coffin Hop winner, Jennifer Smith was among a handful of entrants who correctly identified Three Dog Night as the band "Monster Shindig" singer Danny Hutton fronted in the '60s/'70s. 

Winners, I'll be in touch soon--if you want to drop me a line at aaron.polson(at)gmail.com first, go ahead.

Then there's this:


Five years ago, one of them never left the house... Now, they're back. Welcome home.

Coming soon.

Wednesday, October 26, 2011

WIP Wednesday: The Best Little Editing Book (Ever?)

I'm going through In the Memory House and purging unnecessary language. Not the f-bombs, oh no. Although I've been criticized before, if my characters need to vent, they need to vent.

I'm using suggestions from the late Ken Rand's book, The 10% Solution, to cull unnecessary words from the book.

The ctrl+F (find) feature is a writer's best friend. I've already made an adverb pass (searching for "ly").  I'm currently limiting "of"'s appearances. (I almost wrote "appearances of of"--see how it works?)

What editing tricks do you use to prepare your manuscripts?

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

WIP Wednesday: The Insidiousness of Memory


I'm making some revisions to In the Memory House, and as my intrepid protagonist finds her room, I realize my own memories have spilled onto the page.  Have you ever read "The Yellow Wallpaper" by Charlotte Perkins Gilman? You should. (It's rather creepy.)

I covered poor Kelsey's (the protag) room in yellow wallpaper.

The walls were hung with wallpaper—not a plain yellow, either. Upon closer inspection, she noted a subtle pattern of darker vertical lines, but the lines were made of a tiny, repeated shape. The shape reminded Kelsey of corn cobs. She was in the corn-cob room. Absurd. Her fingers touched the wall and found a slight texture, small bumps where the shapes rose from floor to ceiling. 

And as another character says:

“Yellow. Yech. It’s a rather mustardy shade, don’t you think?”

So there it is--my subconscious giving me details for a spooky room in a spookier house. Thanks Fred.

Have ever accidentally dropped details into a story from fragments of memory?

Tuesday, October 4, 2011

In the Memory House: Canned

And by "canned" I mean the first draft of In the Memory House is DONE.

Whew.

It's a slim book at only 60K, but those words came with a price: months of writing and rewriting and several characters who will never be the same.

Some may have even been harmed in the drafting of this book. *sad face*

On to a short story I've been itching to write, and then edits and the next book and the next and the next...

Happy writing.

Wednesday, September 7, 2011

WIP Wednesday: How Did I Get Here?

My "House" novel, now going by the name In the Memory House is nearing first draft completion.  First draft completion doesn't mean much in my book. As a writer, I am a "pantser" for the most part, one of those free spirits wandering through the plot, dropping suspense and characterization along the way. The characters tend to reveal themselves better this way...

But then I have to pick up the pieces. My lead, a graduate student in psychology, has really shown me dark and secret corners of her life.

Now I have to go back and makes sure the early, more "private" chapters work.

From one of the final chapters:

Kelsey glanced once more at the door, took a breath, and plunged into the dark, groping with both hands now, reaching in front of her and to the sides to find the layout of the space. Her knuckles dragged against stone. She stopped, felt on both sides, and noted a rough, circular cavern. Her hands played with its boundaries. Behind her, the door had vanished, leaving no lingering ambient light. 

She found herself in a cave. She hadn't stepped inside a cave since she was eight.

What are some of your most-powerful childhood memories?