So...I received some feedback from an agent on my full.
Said agent liked the narrative and protagonist's voice, but felt the secondary characters were a bit flat. The subplots needed some steroids. Said agent suggested she would take another look if I wanted to revise. As I mentioned on Monday, I spent the weekend (what free time I could find), cobbling together some extra bits and pieces.
I present, The House Eaters (2.0)...now with more words!
I could really use some beta readers. If interested, please email me at aaron_polson(at)hotmail.com. I will be happy to walk your dog and/or read something of yours.
I like brutally honest kicks in the @$$, so don't hesitate to take out your aggression on my manuscript.