I clobbered the "can't finish a story" monkey today, cracking away the final phrases in my entry for Malpractice. (They already have a pile of entries, but this one could go elsewhere with a few minor revisions). I'm calling it "Bleeding" for now, although I don't think blood is mentioned but once...hmmmmm.
On to revisions! I want this one away by the end of the week.