"Sure." Manny places a crinkled paper sack on the table, reaches inside, and produces a rag. He unwraps the first layer of the rag, revealing dark stains on the folds underneath."Five choices this time...hope one works."
The man with nine fingers slides his right hand under the lamp. The pinkie is severed at the second joint, a clean cut with little scar tissue.
"This one ain't gonna work," he says, lifting one finger from the cloth. "Too short. They'd snipped it at the wrong knuckle."
Manny nods and dabs his damp forhead with the back of his arm.
The man with nine fingers procedes to try each remaining pinkie next to his stump, scrutinizing them under the harsh lamplight, comparing skin tone, size, fit. With a grunt, he tosses the last on the rag with the others and pushes away from the table.
"No good?" Manny asks even though he knows.
"No."
Manny collects the cast offs in his paper sack. "I'll see what I can do...but really, is it worth--"
"Yes, it is." The man with nine fingers frowns. "I don't mind the quotation mark so much--I don't write a lot of dialogue. But the return. The return key is a stretch. Slows me down."
Manny fidgets with the paper sack, crinkling it in his fists.
"It's NaNoWriMo, Manny." The man with nine fingers knocks on the table. "I gotta get my WPM up there. 50K ain't gonna type itself."
12 comments:
NaNoWriMo flash! I love it!
Ick
Dude, that return key gets me every time!
;)
-Mercedes
"He,he,he..very clever," sez Al, as he tests the distance to stretch his ring finger from the 'L' key to the 'Enter'key.
Heh. I think I've found a theme for the month.
haha i like the theme
Oh NaNoWriMo, how glad I am that I am not doing thee.
Bwahahaha! Excellent, excellent theme. Gave me the evil cacklet hat you know very well I live for :D
Samantha - I'll keep it coming.
Cate - you and me both.
Katey - Cackling with you, trust me.
Ha, awesome!
so cruel and yet so true.
The return key would be a stretch... :)
How come you're not listing these on J M Strother's site for #fridayflash?
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