So, if you can stomach a little vocabulary infraction and some Nyotaimori, read "Faith". Let me know what you think. The story came about after reading a random news bit about the "dish".
Today, dear NaNoWriMos, investigate your protagonist's deepest beliefs. These will bubble to the surface in times of trial, either crushed by circumstance or strengthened.
The Tibetan prayer flags are in honor of K.V. Taylor's wonderful entry, "Boudha" in Grant's Pass. Have a lovely Saturday.
Congratulations on the story, Aaron.
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ReplyDeleteThat was great story, Aaron. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThat's a beautiful picture of the prayer flags.
ReplyDeleteLoved the story, loved the punch of it, of every word. I posted there too, but it needs saying twice!
ReplyDeleteBelief is one of my favorite things to explore about a character-- couldn't give better advice! Mmm prayer flags, that's a lovely picture. I have some similar ones from the drive into Lhasa. Brings back good memories.
Thanks for the kind words about Boudha!
Thanks, Alan.
ReplyDeleteNatalie - the wonders one can find on Flickr.
Katey - No, thank you for writing the story.
That's a fine story, Aaron, beautifully told.
ReplyDeleteBTW, the 'adsorbed' has been fixed, but there's another: 'laugher' for 'laughter' in the third para. Not that it matters or detracts from the story. Just thought I'd mention it in case you republish it.
That's an excellent story, really brilliant. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI'm thinkin at some point soon . . . an anonymous letter to a certain school board will be in order . . .
ReplyDeleteWell done!
I really liked the twist. Very satisfying.
ReplyDeleteI liked the story a lot. Well Done.
ReplyDeleteChilling indeed. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteFixed the laugher = laughter typo for you, Aaron. Sorry about that.
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