He pries the name tag from the door, feels the rough, raised letters, and laughs silently at the sound of the name: Feldspar. He casts the plastic strip onto the pile of furniture.
Next, the gasoline from the hallway. It’s an old can, a metal can, a hand-me-down from his father. He douses the desks, the fallen shelves, and the wounded books. He shakes the can to chase free the last drops.
The can drops to the tiled hallway floor with an empty thunk. He fishes through his pockets, sure he had a lighter, but it’s gone missing.
A hand taps him on the shoulder, and the man turns in the darkness, surprised to see a fifteen-year-old face washed in the pale red of the exit sign. The other boys wear masks and carry plastic canisters.
The boy holds out a hand. “Need a light, Mr. Feldspar?”
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Yeah. I'm at school again...today is the first day of "meetings". I'm sure you can guess the inspiration for that little tale.
9 comments:
I love this story more than anything you've ever written, I think. Thanks for posting it. :)
I enjoyed the story as well. It really tells of your enthusiasm at being back in school. Well done, Feldspar...umm, I mean Mr. Polson
I dig stories that start out with active sentences like that. well done!
I was just wondering how well researched that story was. You seem to be pretty handy with an ax.
You have most certainly mastered the concept of saying much with very little. Fabulous hints, wonderful action. Have I mentioned how I love Fridays, now?
(I should send this to my parents and brother, who are in own their little meetings right NOW...)
So you're happy to be back at work then? :D
It's nice when kids help their elders : )
Thanks for reading folks. I survived the meetings...bring on the students!
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