tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post9183088186933152929..comments2023-10-08T03:29:16.941-05:00Comments on Aaron Polson: #fridayflash Unchecked ExpansionAaron Polsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-13294058750401503892012-01-09T10:35:20.317-06:002012-01-09T10:35:20.317-06:00scary and dark.. but also funny.. a perfect combin...scary and dark.. but also funny.. a perfect combination for me.. Excellent writing. Thanks for posting+ welcome to #fridayflashTom Gillespiehttp://www.tom-gillespie.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-53237120723946723112010-01-25T10:33:49.713-06:002010-01-25T10:33:49.713-06:00Ooh, I can't wait for the next installment!Ooh, I can't wait for the next installment!Moxiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351096371994776066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-11709695732816473252010-01-25T09:19:52.005-06:002010-01-25T09:19:52.005-06:00Thanks for reading, all. Petherin - "too col...Thanks for reading, all. Petherin - "too cold" is just my pulp showing.Aaron Polsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-60706854781103189082010-01-25T06:30:45.001-06:002010-01-25T06:30:45.001-06:00It's 'The Blob' for the 2010's! Gr...It's 'The Blob' for the 2010's! Great! The protangonist should leave it to grow to see how big it gets. Great stuff.<br /><br />Apart from.... was the paragraph that just says 'Too cold.' meant to be a bit jokey, 'cos it came across as a bit jokey/cheesy?petherinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16503952182899890752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-81679142994142450572010-01-25T04:32:42.036-06:002010-01-25T04:32:42.036-06:00Welcome to #fridayflash. Hmmm a spongy blue cow th...Welcome to #fridayflash. Hmmm a spongy blue cow that keeps on growing. Noice!Lily Mulhollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804113718224654006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-70764358425523823502010-01-24T23:39:34.807-06:002010-01-24T23:39:34.807-06:00I always wanted those sea monkey things as a kid b...I always wanted those sea monkey things as a kid but maybe I wasn't really missing out all that much. <br /><br />Nice twist. Really well-written and vivid. I am looking forward to tomorrow!<br /><br />And oh yes, welcome to FridayFlash (I feel a bit weird saying that as a newcomer myself, but welcoming you anyway).Chryshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08888604641107836723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-91814685574845036702010-01-24T21:37:16.210-06:002010-01-24T21:37:16.210-06:00Delightfully creepy : )Delightfully creepy : )Fox Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05487359877190292039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-73528820500775796422010-01-24T16:17:11.195-06:002010-01-24T16:17:11.195-06:00Love it - especially the last line.Love it - especially the last line.Danielle Birchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796467053451208102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-9066464197257639912010-01-24T09:36:57.298-06:002010-01-24T09:36:57.298-06:00SLAM! Well written! There will always be a place...SLAM! Well written! There will always be a place in my heart for the next cool monster and this one was well crafted! Welcome to #fridayflash!Weezelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04441857346642599256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-71425338643663125072010-01-24T06:26:37.134-06:002010-01-24T06:26:37.134-06:00Argh!! This is EXACTLY why I hate those things. Fo...Argh!! This is EXACTLY why I hate those things. Four kids, yea. Bought more than a few of those revolting, slimy, horrid growing sponge pieces of crap in my time.<br />Now - I love the idea of using my 9mm on them. Hmmmm.<br />Heh - well done!CJ Hodges MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16833789408143274185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-19457261377517804952010-01-24T06:25:00.613-06:002010-01-24T06:25:00.613-06:00Oooh, jelly-like blue thing = mazzz intrigued.
Wel...Oooh, jelly-like blue thing = mazzz intrigued.<br />Welcome to #fridayflash!mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-40255018120137216042010-01-23T23:17:12.864-06:002010-01-23T23:17:12.864-06:00LOL! I thought this was going to be something like...LOL! I thought this was going to be something like the movie Paramormal..but this is soooo much funnier!!! Maybe just because I can relate.<br />Thanks for sharing!shannon espositohttp://murderinparadise.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-14344215237068593592010-01-23T19:58:43.704-06:002010-01-23T19:58:43.704-06:00I was wondering when you'd start listing your ...I was wondering when you'd start listing your stuff with the #fridayflash. Welcome! Can't wait for Monday now...Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-65403824626894200812010-01-23T18:17:02.776-06:002010-01-23T18:17:02.776-06:00Ack! A good one. I've always been suspicious o...Ack! A good one. I've always been suspicious of those spongy things -- and sea monkeys. Welcome to fridayflash -- great debut! Peace, LindaLindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-41016339723854928302010-01-23T16:39:53.716-06:002010-01-23T16:39:53.716-06:00Man I used to love those sponges-- the ones in lit...Man I used to love those sponges-- the ones in little capsules that just grow and grow. Badass!Kateyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05727622678452936037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-36462396032593047162010-01-22T18:20:38.438-06:002010-01-22T18:20:38.438-06:00Respect... and Welcome
Marc NashRespect... and Welcome<br /><br />Marc NashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-61361852244176963162010-01-22T17:02:43.395-06:002010-01-22T17:02:43.395-06:00Thanks, all. I've been writing flash on Frida...Thanks, all. I've been writing flash on Fridays for a few months, but just decided to jump in the fray. Glad I did (I think).Aaron Polsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-47195773621610057512010-01-22T14:10:03.927-06:002010-01-22T14:10:03.927-06:00Laughed out loud at "bring the gun"
I ...Laughed out loud at "bring the gun" <br /><br />I was just talking about you in my comment thread yesterday Aaron, were your ears burning?<br /><br />Welcome to the group. Always LOVE your work.<br /><br />Karen :0)Karen from Mentorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685540761526680384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-12881618774345014342010-01-22T13:29:59.186-06:002010-01-22T13:29:59.186-06:00A fun little blue-jelly-thingy slice. Nice quick i...A fun little blue-jelly-thingy slice. Nice quick intro and in for the kill. May not need "clearly" since "smashed" and "leg juts" covers the wreckage.<br /><br />A purpose? Selling blue-jelly-thingy dissolver? No? Well, I might need some after reading this. Hope salt works.<br />-David G ShrockAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-76026138399823990882010-01-22T13:25:25.542-06:002010-01-22T13:25:25.542-06:00Tense and taut...and scary,
Very good addition t...Tense and taut...and scary, <br /><br />Very good addition to #fridayflash. Welcome!Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-30648655515246194282010-01-22T13:22:27.236-06:002010-01-22T13:22:27.236-06:00Welcome to #fridayflash. This is quite a debut. ...Welcome to #fridayflash. This is quite a debut. Love how you build the suspense, and that ending...:)<br /><br />My kids have one of those things - an octopus. Forget putting that in water!Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-61123055082329067402010-01-22T13:03:56.344-06:002010-01-22T13:03:56.344-06:00Those impulse purchases get you every time! Hi, Aa...Those impulse purchases get you every time! Hi, Aaron, welcome to #fridayflash. This was a great story, the timing is just right and the mounting tension is just right. "The blue thing undulates like jelly..." Great line, I can just see it, even if I don't want to! Thanks for sharing it. You've got a really interesting blog. I'm going to go explore now!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-12825379054094850392010-01-22T11:34:35.630-06:002010-01-22T11:34:35.630-06:00I can't wait for Monday now! And that, my frie...I can't wait for Monday now! And that, my friend, is a rare gift. :)Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-71989635435356115362010-01-22T11:27:07.913-06:002010-01-22T11:27:07.913-06:00Jamie - You've inspired me to up the Monday mo...Jamie - You've inspired me to up the Monday morning ante.<br /><br />K.C. - Don't be scared. It's only a story. You can always look away.Aaron Polsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-49322928166715935132010-01-22T08:43:23.945-06:002010-01-22T08:43:23.945-06:00lol! I am a little frightened about what you'r...lol! I am a little frightened about what you're going to reveal on Monday, but I loved the story. :)K.C. Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467201304235217944noreply@blogger.com