tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post5798037615855198985..comments2023-10-08T03:29:16.941-05:00Comments on Aaron Polson: The FindAaron Polsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-28829284493945499002009-06-28T19:25:08.723-05:002009-06-28T19:25:08.723-05:00Whatever it was, it was great. I loved it.Whatever it was, it was great. I loved it.Danielle Birchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11796467053451208102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-57113712558784275792009-06-27T09:26:03.565-05:002009-06-27T09:26:03.565-05:00How did I miss this yesterday? That was awesome. S...How did I miss this yesterday? That was awesome. Short, but it really built up the tension great. The last line provided a perfect visual in the mind.Jameson T. Cainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08989529177998260901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-39043926879309334842009-06-27T00:04:51.009-05:002009-06-27T00:04:51.009-05:00I liked it.
I occasionally [Fiction] Friday which...I liked it.<br /><br />I occasionally [Fiction] Friday which is a prompt-based writing challenge done through the blog writeanything.wordpress.comBenjamin Solahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10657105522335752577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-45455461239255143282009-06-26T18:36:49.837-05:002009-06-26T18:36:49.837-05:00I like that! Very nice ending too.
Now we have a ...I like that! Very nice ending too.<br /><br />Now we have a reason to look forward to Fridays. Er, an extra reason.K.C. Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467201304235217944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-83245594113206018482009-06-26T17:07:09.267-05:002009-06-26T17:07:09.267-05:00You definitely did not stomp your punchline on tha...You definitely did not stomp your punchline on that piece, Aaron. Great ending image!Roberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11958488745475196164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-78234549900332763482009-06-26T16:23:41.565-05:002009-06-26T16:23:41.565-05:00Cate - I'd never...(well, maybe...)
Brendan -...Cate - I'd never...(well, maybe...)<br /><br />Brendan - Now that you mention it, I see what you mean. That's the beauty of the reader/writer relationship. <br /><br />Natalie - Coming from the author of "Relentless Sodomy", that means something. ;)Aaron Polsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-56982820595481230502009-06-26T14:44:02.809-05:002009-06-26T14:44:02.809-05:00Call it "Flasher Fridays." Sex sells!Call it "Flasher Fridays." Sex sells!Fox Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05487359877190292039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-47192903524477804802009-06-26T11:55:50.589-05:002009-06-26T11:55:50.589-05:00Thought with "the sun starting to set" y...Thought with "the sun starting to set" you were going in a different direction. But I liked it!Brendan P. Myershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02152826197748921049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-71389663958217547092009-06-26T11:21:03.699-05:002009-06-26T11:21:03.699-05:00You're going to flash on Fridays - woot ;D
Lo...You're going to flash on Fridays - woot ;D<br /><br />Love that end line.Cate Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05634397106201021055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-18624307425630039632009-06-26T10:38:03.534-05:002009-06-26T10:38:03.534-05:00Katey - Fridays should be fun...that's the goa...Katey - Fridays should be fun...that's the goal. <br /><br />Rebecca - most of the furniture around here is pine, too...or particle board. The bloodstains should clear up with a little work.Aaron Polsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-68728327341598835712009-06-26T10:10:46.243-05:002009-06-26T10:10:46.243-05:00I'd love a maple armoire. Mine is pine, a piec...I'd love a maple armoire. Mine is pine, a piece of crap. Body be damned.Rebecca Nazarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14586998368101239421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-58923767457307037382009-06-26T10:04:13.347-05:002009-06-26T10:04:13.347-05:00Yeah, the whole thing was really fun, and then the...Yeah, the whole thing was really fun, and then the last line was a real punch to the gut. Beautiful stopping sentence-- I love a good image.<br /><br />This makes Fridays even more fun. I'm excited!Kateyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05727622678452936037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-37012940119040846332009-06-26T08:43:04.904-05:002009-06-26T08:43:04.904-05:00Jamie - I wish my students would be a little more ...Jamie - I wish my students would be a little more bold sometimes. <br /><br />I thought that last line sold the piece. Robert Swartwood had a nice post a while back about punchline stomps. I'm trying to get better at not killing my stomps.Aaron Polsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-71611913932635521152009-06-26T08:29:52.015-05:002009-06-26T08:29:52.015-05:00Whenever I read a story from you I always wonder w...Whenever I read a story from you I always wonder what your students (who know your super secret identity) think about your stories and does it embolden them in your classroom with their own writing. <br /><br />Very nice piece of flash by the way. I liked the last sentence best of all.Jamie Eyberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05875759697016701358noreply@blogger.com