tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post1235335140219657862..comments2023-10-08T03:29:16.941-05:00Comments on Aaron Polson: Author's Notes: "13 Pieces, Also the Dark"Aaron Polsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-91873606103338806012013-11-26T14:19:37.311-06:002013-11-26T14:19:37.311-06:00Thanks for the read and kind comments. It's fu...Thanks for the read and kind comments. It's fun to play with words--and sometimes it works. Aaron Polsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15173267932358617304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5604033530537822263.post-54447871208348584512013-11-26T12:32:31.234-06:002013-11-26T12:32:31.234-06:00I liked the 13 pieces format idea and enjoyed the ...I liked the 13 pieces format idea and enjoyed the story. Notably, the narrator passed no judgment on himself for not intervening in the murder, or on the neighbour for his crime. That in itself was creepy and added to the effect. My favourite line was, 'I watch the man’s house with a pair of binoculars I purchased at Ernst and Sons Hardware.' Casual, unexpected and a great hook. Good job. botanicarosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01385326022810692280noreply@blogger.com